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©2009 ~mpanther
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I took up a commission offer to do a Transformation comic. 10 pages in all, and all sketch only.



Page: 10/10

Last page.
More Chibi thoughts and a happy ending... I dunno if it's karma but it almost seems Mephis is getting what he asked for.

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:iconcaitsith29:*caitsith29 wrote the story.

:iconmpanther:=mpanther did the art.

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:icontails230:
XD, this was a great TF.

Run Cait! Run!

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Avatar Made by ~VampireNOMNOMS.

swoosh~shazam~Tails is comin, and comin, and boom~ he's gone, ridin a roller coaster~ Song by Little-Wolf-Kid
:iconsinenv:
Hehehe, I liked reading this, it was really funny. ^^

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Housemuziek maakt jongeren kapot!
Nou, alles kapot!
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Where do we come from?
How do you explain that some things live and other things don't?
How do you explain the origin of everything there is?
The problem of knowledge
The problem of contacts
:iconrollingeye:
Same thing I said with some of the earlier pages, a couple action lines would really help show the "vroom" factor. In the third panel, that would have shown Cait performing a sharp head-turn.

Mephis came out pretty well in the third panel, a clear showing of what he's doing. I wonder if that actually works, with the whole "food in front of face thing"? Since Cait's mouth is open, I would recommend having some sorta sound come out.

Not a bad read at all, keep up the good work mentlegen.

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"People are not chocolates. They are bastard covered bastards with a bastard filling" --Cox
:iconluigirocks84:
Wow, this is a very interesting and fun comic MP, I liked it very much ^-^

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April 16, 2008, Luigi the Eevee(me) evolve into a Vaporeon and lovin' it! :aww:

Pokemon Pearl FC: 3694 6844 3449, I'm always ready for a battle or a trade! X3
:iconmpanther:
I am glad you enjoyed it that much. :3

Hopefully I can get more out soon as well. Commissioned and Non.
:iconmpanther:
Glad you enjoyed it. :3
:iconluigirocks84:
Can't wait :3

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April 16, 2008, Luigi the Eevee(me) evolve into a Vaporeon and lovin' it! :aww:

Pokemon Pearl FC: 3694 6844 3449, I'm always ready for a battle or a trade! X3
:iconbluefantasy:
This turned out really good! You've really got the details down on the chocobo especially. Choco-cait is cute. ^.^

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"Maybe if we pulled together,
we could change a million lives for the better,
and maybe if we prayed a little more
we would stop living in fear from the storm"
:iconcaitsith29:
I prefer to be called Caitobo, WARK! But I agree. :>

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IMA FIRING MAH LAZOR!

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